“Humans are stupid.
Yes, I mean you, you, and that person over there. I mean your family, your friends, your loved ones, the people you meet for mere seconds in your daily life. Every one. You are all a bunch of fools.
You put too much value on reality, not realizing that it's the monster that chases away every inch of happiness out of your life. You are afraid of dreaming, and those who aren't, feel ashamed by it. You value reality over imagination, and that is your biggest flaw.
When you were little, you had no differentiation between imagination and reality. You believed in the impossible, in magic. You dared to step out of the box.
When you were five, you tried to move an object with your eyes. It didn't work.
When you seven, you waved a wooden stick pretending it's a wand. It didn't work.
When you were ten, you closed you eyes and hoped for a miracle. It still didn't work.
Magic keeps failing you, and that's the beauty of it. You keep hoping that it is real. After all, you've read the stories. They must be true. There's an innocent certainty in human children that leaves us in awe. Their constant trials makes us happy.
But then, that innocent certainty gets stained by a single drop of doubt. And then some more. And soon enough, you give up on magic. You stop talking to your fairy, and stop wishing upon a shooting star.
Humans call it adulthood.
We call it foolery.
There is nothing more stupid than doubting magic, or worse, not believing in it. It is when you do so, that you sign up for a dull future. Some give up after a few trials, most of you give up after fifty. It's the number we use to differentiate between the fools, and the.. otherwise.
Those whom you call crazy. The beggars you avoid because they are talking to themselves, or the people you throw into mental hospitals.. they are the otherwise. They have all tried to wish for magic more than fifty times.
You call them crazy.
We still call you stupid.
My job is to get those gems out of your sad world and into mine. It's very easy really, it happens with two snaps of my finger. Snap, and they are taken from your world, and snap, they are thrust into my mine.
The better world.
It always saddens me how uncelebrated they leave your world. If they are mental patients, sometimes the nurses cry, but otherwise they depart without notice. If they are little kids or ordinary men and women, there are more tears shed. Before you move on with your dull life, you set up what you call a funeral. You weep and cry for the loss.
We, on the other side, celebrate.
It is what takes me so long to collect the otherwise. After each human is transferred into our world, a seven night long celebration takes place. We have to show them a hint of the unimaginable that awaits them. Seven nights in my world is a few several years in yours.
I happen to be the only one transferring the otherwise.
That brilliant author who dared dream of magical worlds so terrifyingly close to ours? I am going to take his life.
That girl painting a picture she conjured solely from her imagination? I am going to take her life.
That old man gazing up the sky, hoping with all his heart for his loved one to come back to life? I am going to take his life as well.
I might take your life too, one day. That is, if you are a dreamer.
Will you dare hope for magic more than fifty times?
If so, join us, why don't you?”
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This week's suggestions comes from the ever so awesome Eve @ Paper Sanctuary. Her prompt was Twisted Liar which makes sense when you read the full version of the short story. I decided to go with a shorter version here, but if you want to read the full one, here it is.
Did you hear that sound? It's the sound of me writing a story without a sad ending. I knew I can do it!
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Mmmmmmmmmm... delightfully creepy <3 Especially the last few sentences. Seems like you're on a reaping spree :D Or whoever the narrator is *wink wink*
And why am I not surprised you chose Twisted Liar? :D It's a catchy phrase, I admit. But, I have to say, this is even better than the other stories <3 I like the creepy feelings it gave me. Kind of like goosebumps. I like that you adress the reader, it's like a letter.
Man, I hope you're not talking to me :D:D:D Otherwise (see what I did here? nothing, actually :D) I might have nightmares. The fuzzy, warm, terrifying kind. Next time I'll inspire you to write a story about ponies... slaughtering each other!
*Just now, all the kids in the world let out identical screams :O*
THE END.
Twisted Liar was right up my alley, right? And no, no, I would never reap brilliant authors. Kidnapping them on the other hand...
No! no!
And it is a letter actually. The first thing I had in mind was "Humans are stupid" and I went on from there :P And you know, I didn't even wait til today to write this story. I finished it the day you gave me the suggestion 'cause it was awesome!
But.. but.. ponies scare me. Actually, it's the unicorns that scare the crap out of me. I don't know why.
I GOT IT! I GOT IT! How about... *drumroll* A war between ponies and unicorns?
Nice! I'm sold.
Okay wow I enjoyed this so much! It speaks so much about our mindset as we grow and I just love the whole mystery and how little we know about this person or creature. Just wonderful! Fantastic story Reem ^^
Really glad you liked this! And yes, there is somewhat of a mystery behind this letter ;)
Thank you for taking the time to read this, Charlotte!
Oooh interesting. I'm not sure what to make of this. Like part of me thinks that everyone must eventually die just because they've reached beyond their 50th attempt. But then part of me thinks no, you're not saying they die but that they disappear. And then I wonder where to and why 50 and what it all means. AHHHHH! SO MANY QUESTIONS!
I love it though. Very different from the other short stories you wrote!
I think the first idea I got was that someone was watching me as a kid trying to make magic real, you know? :P and no, I didn't intend that those people die, but get transferred into another world so to say :P
It's pretty vague, and that's why I wanted to make a longer version, but the post would've been too long! Glad you liked it Asti :)