You are no one in the Free City.
No one will ask who you are, and in return, you ask no one.
The King's Army turned a blind eye to the Free City. It was like a phantom in the middle of the kingdom, to be unspoken of. You see, the Free City is a refuge for men and women with no past; and in most cases no future. The city is rife with thieves and murderers lucky enough to escape from their sentence. And between those criminals, lies the most dangerous one: the soldier in the corset dress. The girl who escaped her village instead of staying and fighting. The girl who betrayed her people.
I stayed at the Free City for eight months, and no one dared ask where I come form. It was clear that I was a northerner, of course. My fiery red hair gave me away. I had expected to find many other northerners. Say what you will about the Free City, with it's nooks and crannies where one might be robbed of their life, but it was still safer than the north villages. But there was only one other red headed girl here. I met her within a week of my stay, and that's when everything started.
The girl, Helena, was pregnant at the time, and as much as I wanted someone to talk to, I avoided her. It was the day that I saw the man she was with that I stopped avoiding her. That is not to say I went to chat; I held a knife to her man's throat.
I knew him all too well. A soldier of the King's army, son of General Vlair. I first saw him at the Battle of Deroos years ago, he set my aunt's hut on fire, took off on his horse and never looked back. I would have killed him at sight, that much I knew. When there is a knife in your hand, you don't think. And yet I did, I looked back at the woman he was with. Who she is. What she is.
So the rumors where true. Thomas the Vlairian had escaped the army after his father's death and ran off with a northerner.
Seven months later, I was still at the Free City, but by then everyone knew who I was. Here is the thing about a refuge: They might be safe, but they are a prison in on themselves. The dwellers of the Free City longed to go out. To my surprise, some of those criminals had dreams and ambitions just like the innocent. None of those dreams could be possible as long as they were imprisoned in the Free City. As long as the King's Army existed.
The dwellers of the Free City had a common enemy.
Now, the stone under my cheek feels cold. Behind me, the headsman is sharpening his sword. Had it been another time, I would have took a moment to admire it's beauty. In front of me the crowd had gathered, along with a large number of the King's Soldiers. In a moment, the Capital's bell will ring seven times, signaling my death, and the crowd will cheer with happiness.
It will also signal the army of criminals, thieves, murderers to enter the city, end their imprisonment, and make their voice heard. The men and women outside are paving their future with their own hands. They might be stealing their dreams, rather than accomplishing them, but then again, what other choice do imprisoned criminals have? Some of them might die, but they won't die in vain.
I won't either. I was supposed to die almost a year ago, the day I opened the gates for the enemy. I should have died fighting alongside my people. Instead, the Universe decided to grant me another year, and now the Universe was demanding it back. My death today won't redeem my betrayal a year ago, but it will help others. You see, the more Capital Soldiers that gather to witness my beheading, the better chance the criminals outside the Capital's gates have of succeeding.
I know better than anyone how much the element of surprise works.
The seventh bell rings, and the beautiful sword swings down, slicing me.
And then silence. I don't feel anything. I'm dead, but I'm still conscious. Not for long though, the world will turn black any moment now.
But long enough to see the Capital's Gates open.
Thomas is in the front lines, fire in his eyes, and Helena by his side.
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Note: In all honesty, this short story probably might not make any sense to people who haven't read the first two short stories. It's a conclusion to both stories. Here is the first, and the second.
Anyway, this week's suggestion comes from Jessylyn @Books Over Flowers. Her suggestion was Redemption and Honor. Oh, and I know I promised a more cheerful ending last week, but since happy endings are physically hard for me to write, I opted for a bitter sweet one. You know, with the criminals fighting the King's Army, there would be no more northerners killed, which is what I promised last week.
Oh, except that girl I beheaded.
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Woah that was pretty good :D I guess you can't always have happy endings and just do whatever suits you the most and what feels right for the story.
Yet another amazing short story <3 Seriously, I can't wait to read the book you're writing (assuming you take pity on me and throw me a bone :D). I like the feel these stories give away. It's dark and you know it's hopeless and they're helpless, but you're still rooting for the characters either way.
Should I start suggesting stories for next week? I'm on a creative spree.
i don't think I've commented on your stories before, but I'm LOVING them. And I think this is my favorite so far! Keep it coming!! :)
Thanks Charlotte :D And yeah, in this case it was pretty hard to have a happy ending.
Wohooo! glad you like this Eve. And pfft, like I'd forget to send the evil lord a copy of my book (I know if I don't, you'll get your own way, and I wouldn't want that :/ )
And OMG YES! Unleash the creativity, boss :D
Yaay! Glad you like them Cayce! I was a bit unsure about this one, but yeah, it turned out well :)
Prepare to be amazed. :D Just lower your expectations so you can be truly surprised!!!!!!!
Seeing as you enjoy dark stories, I'll give you dark words.
Twisted
Liar
Betrayal
Scot (as if you didn't see that one coming :D:D)
Prisoner
Death
Carnival (a little diversity wont kill me)
Pom-poms
Princess Consuela Banana Hammock.
Great conclusion, but so bitter sweet! I like how everything comes in a full circle; it ends with the soldier in the corset dress, but begins again with Thomas and Helena.
I'm still hoping for something more cheerful, but your stories so far are lovely. Your writing is beautiful and evoke so many emotions. Keep up the good work! :D
Twisted liar. I LOVE that! *goes brainstorming*
and OMG Princess Consuela Banana Hammock? I was thinking about that like yesterday :P
Yeah, I hadn't even thought of bringing them back again, but I couldn't leave their story unfinished, you know? :D
The cheerful is coming... any day now :P But thank you, your words mean a LOT :D
Chilling, but amazing as always! And I think that bittersweet ending was perfect - much better than a happy ending, in my opinion. This story goes out with a bang, even if someone's life gets snuffed out. Eve has already suggested some stuff, so I'll try to be the first to comment the next time you post a short story so I can suggest something! :) Awesome work, Reem!
I can't wait for your suggestions, Meg! :) And yeah, a happy ending would have been hard to apply to a story like this. Someone must have been sacrificed in order to go on with the story. I'm really glad you like this, it means a lot :D
So, I read this when you first published it but don't see my comment here so am wondering what happened. Did I not comment? Or did I but it disappeared? Anyways, another great one. I love how it always end up dark and twisted at the end. It makes my evil little heart fall in love with your writing so easily... ;)
Maybe disqus was acting weird like it always does? Oh, and yeah, I settled for a bittersweet ending this time.
And this is actually my evil plan: To reach out to all the other evil minds ;) Thanks Asti!