The music echoes throughout the longest night ever, the masquerade night.
It's the one night northerners can bury their grief behind a mask, and dance the night away. Men and women a step away from death take to the streets. The people are giddy, and not just because they're drunk- their bodies held more wine than a wine barrel- but because for one night, they were allowed to be happy.
I didn't have a single drop of wine in me. I hated the damn thing; a soldier's mind has to be awake at all times. Being dizzy only makes me more anxious.
Also, tonight was not the night to be drunk.
It's been two years since General Vlair was murdered. It's been one year since the last attack on my people, the northerners. A year after Vlair was killed, a new General rose, demanding the blood of my people, slaying them right and left. This is how we live now, in constant fear.
But all this will end after the masquerade.
I haven't attempted to dance all night; the dress I was wearing was strangling. My fellow soldiers were trying to suppress their laughs. It was a sight indeed, a soldier in a corset dress. Half of those soldiers wished I wasn't one of them at all. But when your numbers are dwindling, women, children and old men become soldiers. Mind you, I was the best out of my troop.
That is why I am the one opening the gates at midnight.
When the captain gave us the order a fortnight ago, no one dared to argue. He was our captain after all. We swore an oath to give our lives to him. And it was time for peace. We fight bravely, all of us, but none of us believes we can win this war. Our hatred for the Kingdom is what made us soldiers in the first place, but we shouldn't fool ourselves. We are doomed. We are poor and unarmed, and the Kingdom's army outnumbers us a hundred times over.
The city bell rang four times, and every soldier froze in their places. The music didn't stop; our people don't know what awaits them. But we.. we do.
I am already standing at the city gates. I keep thinking if what I am doing is right as I open the doors for the enemy.
It's time we give up. Yes, we will be slaves for the Kingdom, but aren't we already? Isn't this the whole point of the masquerade? A night to pretend that we are not living a constant nightmare? Us, the northerners, we don't wish each other a good night; we wish we'd each live to see the morning.
It's better to be a safe slave, than a free coward.
What we're doing is right.
At least that is what I believed, until the King's army stepped through the gates, sword in hand.
And then there was blood. Everywhere.
We are the Kingdom's rats. You don't enslave rats. You kill them.
My people were taken by surprise, the enemy cutting them open without blinking. Where mere seconds ago stood dancers, corpses lay now. The last man I saw get killed was our Captain. He looked me in the eye as a sword sliced through him. He died as a warrior should; fighting as his last breath leaves his body.
No one survived the masquerade.
Except the soldier in the corset. The soldier who opened the gates for the enemy. The soldier who ran off before she could take down even one of her people's murderers.
A coward.
But that coward was the best of her troop.
That
coward was headed for the Kingdom.
Side
note: This story is sort of a follow up on last week's Blood
and Gore.
I keep killing off the northerners, poor fellas. This week's prompt
comes from the fantabulous Asti @A
Bookish Heart. In
all honesty, her suggestion was "Power outage at the Masquerade"
but umm.. too bad the northerners have not discovered electricity yet
(sorry about that!). Oh, and one can hope next week's story would be
a little more.. cheerful? *crosses fingers*
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Don't forget to give me a prompt for next week's story (my cookie offer is still standing).
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Don't forget to give me a prompt for next week's story (my cookie offer is still standing).
Oooh interesting. I see a theme going on with your stories. The MC seems to always be a rebel on the run afterwards! ;) And haha that they haven't discovered electricity yet. That's okay. I was too busy spending part of the story imagining a male solder in a dress and corset, even though you made it clear it was a female. I just thought the visualization was too funny.
That would be the next thing that pops into my mind for a prompt: The Cross-dressing Northerner! :P
The Cross dressing Scotsmen? Eve would love that! but yeah, I don't know what it is, but deceit has to play an element in anything I write.
I just imagined a burly soldier in a corset, LOL! And red lipstick.
Lovely follow up! It's nice to see the Northerners' side, even though it's a sad reality. They can't seem to get break, can they? By the way, what era is this written in?
Also, since the MC are always on the run how about a prompt on: Redemption & Honor!
Redemption and Honor! I love this!
And yeah, the northerners are an unlucky bunch :P, this is supposed to be medieval-ish era. It's in the same era as this book I'm writing, although they have completely different plots. Maybe I'll incorporate them together somehow.
Scots need no dresses - they have kilts. Easy access, especially if they're going commando.
As for the story, I love it <3 It has this eerie vibe and you kind of guess what the MC is going to do at the end, but you pray otherwise. Anyway, I'm sure he/she was one fancy running coward :D
You've got some beastly talent about this. It's not a compliment, but truth. I've read published books who weren't written half as good. You should definitely start publishing those short stories somewhere! I think there was this site... wattpad or something? I can't remember the name correctly but I've seen it before so I know it exists! xD
As for another idea, I'm still waiting for half-naked Scots playing dirty rugby. In the mud. Mmm... *SALIVA SALIVA SALIVA*
LOL at easy access :P how about Easy Access for Half Naked Scots: A Memoir? Sounds like a self help book, but whatever! I actually have a lot of other fan fics to write (like the world domination thingie).
Wow, THANK YOU, Eve! Really, this made my day!! I did post some things on wattpad, but the site confuses me :/
I haven't read Blood and Gore yet, but I did see your post about it! I'll check it out as soon as I'm done with this comment. :) Anyway, you're a wonderful writer! I loved the way you created suspense not only with the short paragraphs but with your words as well. And the descriptions! LOVELY. Great job! Looking forward to more. :)
Yaay! Glad you like this Meg! I was a bit hesitant about posting my short stories here, but you guys have been more supportive than I ever imagined :)